User contributions for 1995hoo
A user with 6,736 edits. Account created on 28 July 2006.
4 June 2024
- 14:3914:39, 4 June 2024 diff hist +10 2023 FIFA Club World Cup Undid revision 1227211271 by AutisticAndrew (talk)—I undid this edit because grammatically it didn't work. "They" rendered the sentence ambiguous because the antecedent was unclear. "The English team" may not be the ideal phrasing, but at least it indicates which team is meant. "The latter won the edition" would probably work. current Tag: Undo
- 14:0314:03, 4 June 2024 diff hist +76 m Wikipedia:Administrators' noticeboard/Incidents →Stubbornness of user AutisticAndrew and not being collaborative.: revised my comment in view of Mdann52's action.
- 14:0214:02, 4 June 2024 diff hist +766 Wikipedia:Administrators' noticeboard/Incidents →Stubbornness of user AutisticAndrew and not being collaborative.: comment.
- 13:4513:45, 4 June 2024 diff hist +1 m User talk:AutisticAndrew Added a comma in my previous edit. The template wrongly omits the comma in direct address, so I had to fix it manually.
- 13:4213:42, 4 June 2024 diff hist +1,314 User talk:AutisticAndrew →June 2024: notice about edit-warring.
- 13:4013:40, 4 June 2024 diff hist −90 2025 FIFA Club World Cup I guess we have to warn Autistic Andrew about edit-warring and violating 3RR. current Tag: Manual revert
- 13:2113:21, 4 June 2024 diff hist −2 2025 FIFA Club World Cup "Manchester City" is singular in American English, which this article is tagged to use. Tags: Manual revert Reverted
- 13:1913:19, 4 June 2024 diff hist 0 m Challenger: The Final Flight →Episodes: the article is about an American miniseries and therefore calls for American spelling, which "authorises" is not. current
2 June 2024
- 20:2020:20, 2 June 2024 diff hist +481 Wikipedia:Sockpuppet investigations/2607:fea8:45e3:8000:3064:461d:b189:9356 →Comments by other users: an observation about the new user's username.
- 15:0015:00, 2 June 2024 diff hist −5 Windsor Express Undid revision 1226535880 by CanadianEditor1995 (talk) —the article about the league itself says it is a pro league, so a source is required for "semi-." current Tag: Undo
- 14:5914:59, 2 June 2024 diff hist −5 Sudbury Five Undid revision 1226535854 by CanadianEditor1995 (talk) —the article about the league itself says it is a pro league, so a source is required for "semi-." current Tag: Undo
- 14:5914:59, 2 June 2024 diff hist −4 Newfoundland Rogues Undid revision 1226535821 by CanadianEditor1995 (talk) —the article about the league itself says it is a pro league, so a source is required for "semi-." current
- 14:5814:58, 2 June 2024 diff hist −5 Montreal Tundra Undid revision 1226535772 by CanadianEditor1995 (talk) —the article about the league itself says it is a pro league, so a source is required for "semi-." current Tag: Undo
- 14:5814:58, 2 June 2024 diff hist −5 KW Titans Undid revision 1226535686 by CanadianEditor1995 (talk) —the article about the league itself says it is a pro league, so a source is required for "semi-." current Tag: Undo
- 14:5714:57, 2 June 2024 diff hist −5 London Lightning Undid revision 1226535556 by CanadianEditor1995 (talk)—the article about the league itself says it is a pro league, so a source is required for "semi-." current Tag: Undo
- 14:5514:55, 2 June 2024 diff hist −171 Kontinental Hockey League The unsourced statement about the St. Petersburg arena may well be true, but it doesn’t merit inclusion in the first paragraph of an article about a league. It might fit somewhere else, if appropriately sourced. Tag: Manual revert
- 13:0113:01, 2 June 2024 diff hist −2 m 2025 FIFA Club World Cup Singular/plural disagreement.
- 12:5912:59, 2 June 2024 diff hist +1,157 Talk:Utah NHL team →Stop calling it an expansion team: Looks like we have another sockpuppet. Tag: Reply
28 May 2024
- 19:3219:32, 28 May 2024 diff hist −15 m Alexander Ovechkin →Hart Trophy wins, beginning of captaincy (2007–2013): "in all seven games against the Flyers as the Capitals were eliminated in the opening round in seven games"—the final three words were redundant because all rounds are best-of-seven and the sentence already refers to seven games. If they played seven games and were eliminated in the opening round, it means they played seven games in that year's playoffs. (I remember those games all too well as we attended all four home games.)
- 15:5315:53, 28 May 2024 diff hist 0 m Davenport Field at Disharoon Park →Perfect Game: "perfect game" is not a proper noun.
27 May 2024
- 22:4122:41, 27 May 2024 diff hist −22 Las Vegas Strip Circuit Undid revision 1225981667 by 1995hoo (talk)—self-revert. I have a better idea. I’ll deal with it after dinner or tomorrow. current Tag: Undo
- 22:0122:01, 27 May 2024 diff hist +22 Las Vegas Strip Circuit Undid revision 1225980475 by Cherkash (talk)—No. it’s going to be consistent with the other F1 circuits in the US and it doesn’t confuse anyone. Tags: Undo Reverted
- 21:2921:29, 27 May 2024 diff hist 0 2025 FIFA Club World Cup Undid revision 1225968897 by Daxion (talk)—the article is tagged to use American English, as with most major soccer competitions held in the United States, and you haven’t given any reason to change it. Tag: Undo
- 14:5514:55, 27 May 2024 diff hist +486 User talk:The Kip →SPI: Reply to note the SPI is closed. Tag: Reply
- 13:1813:18, 27 May 2024 diff hist +24 m Phoenix street circuit US racing circuit, US measurements come first. current
- 13:1413:14, 27 May 2024 diff hist +18 m Las Vegas Strip Circuit →Lap records: fixed the table heading units for consistency with the other two current US F1 circuits. Note this only applies to the circuit article. The article about the Grand Prix correctly puts metric first.
- 13:1113:11, 27 May 2024 diff hist +36 m Circuit of the Americas →Record lap times: the table's distances should use miles first, consistent with the rest of the article, because it’s not exclusively about the F1 race. current
- 13:0113:01, 27 May 2024 diff hist +215 m Wikipedia:Sockpuppet investigations/Joseph507357 →Comments by other users: added one sentence to my prior comment.
- 12:5612:56, 27 May 2024 diff hist +453 User talk:The Kip →SPI: new section. Tag: New topic
- 12:5412:54, 27 May 2024 diff hist +16 m Wikipedia:Sockpuppet investigations/Joseph507357 →Comments by other users: sorry, I misspelled The Kip's name!
- 12:5212:52, 27 May 2024 diff hist +1,330 Wikipedia:Sockpuppet investigations/Joseph507357 →Comments by other users: comment to note what I’ve observed.
- 01:4701:47, 27 May 2024 diff hist −150 E-ZPass Reverted out WP:GF edits that were unintelligible. If I can figure out what was meant, I’ll try to restore in coherent English. Tag: Manual revert
- 01:4301:43, 27 May 2024 diff hist +1 Las Vegas Strip Circuit →Alleged attempt to prevent circuit certification: US racing circuit, US date format, like the rest of the darn article.
- 01:4201:42, 27 May 2024 diff hist 0 Las Vegas Strip Circuit →Layout: missed a few more. Note I left the one about top speed during the race because that speed would have been recorded in km/h, so metric first is appropriate there—and only there.
- 01:3901:39, 27 May 2024 diff hist 0 Las Vegas Strip Circuit →Layout: #$&*, it’s hard to spot all of these.
- 01:3801:38, 27 May 2024 diff hist 0 Las Vegas Strip Circuit →Layout: another instance of someone erroneously putting metric first.
- 01:3801:38, 27 May 2024 diff hist +22 Las Vegas Strip Circuit Undid revision 1224175690 by Cherkash (talk)—miles come first in an article about an American racing circuit. In the article about the race, metric comes first because F1 uses metric, but this is not an article about the race. Tags: Undo Reverted
- 00:5600:56, 27 May 2024 diff hist +15 m Springsteen and E Street Band 2023 Tour →Absences and illness-related postponements: kindly stop violating MOS:DATECOMMA. This is a very simple rule. Also, the use of "soon" arguably violates WP:NOTNEWS and [MOS:CURRENTLY]]. This article isn’t a tour diary. Various other grammar cleanup. The previous few edits read like a stream-of-consciousness barrage.
- 00:5100:51, 27 May 2024 diff hist +203 User talk:2607:FEA8:45E3:8000:C413:C56B:FA20:C330 →May 2024: sockpuppet.
26 May 2024
- 19:3719:37, 26 May 2024 diff hist +17 2025 FIFA Club World Cup Undid revision 1225795898 by 2405:201:F006:B117:5DF0:4C41:AE5:60CE (talk)—vandalism. Tag: Undo
- 00:4500:45, 26 May 2024 diff hist −2 m STS-2 →Mission summary: corrected erroneous use of British spellings. current
- 00:4000:40, 26 May 2024 diff hist 0 m STS-1 →Mission summary: corrected another erroneous use of British spelling.
- 00:3800:38, 26 May 2024 diff hist +1 m STS-1 →Mission summary: this article is, quite properly, tagged to use American English. "Utilising" is not the correct spelling in American English.
25 May 2024
- 21:5521:55, 25 May 2024 diff hist +989 Talk:Utah NHL team →Stop calling it an expansion team: comment about sockpuppet suspicions.
- 21:3721:37, 25 May 2024 diff hist +152 Utah NHL team Reverted vandalism. I strongly suspect, but cannot prove, that we have a sockpuppet here in view of the rant about not reverting his edits. He deleted a citation that proved him wrong. Tag: Manual revert
- 19:2619:26, 25 May 2024 diff hist 0 Virginia Cavaliers football Undid revision 1225613624 by 71.222.71.153 (talk)—unsourced random change. If you want to change that, provide a reliable source. current Tag: Undo
24 May 2024
- 13:4113:41, 24 May 2024 diff hist +14 m Space Shuttle orbiter →See also: I initially wasn't going to change the link to Buran because that article uses the British spelling, but upon reflection I think a piped link is appropriate because the American spelling is more appropriate in this article. current
- 13:4013:40, 24 May 2024 diff hist −2 m Space Shuttle orbiter →See also: "Programme" is not the correct spelling in American English.
- 02:2502:25, 24 May 2024 diff hist +1 m 2024 Calder Cup playoffs →Eastern Confrence: the word is "conference," not "confrence."
23 May 2024
- 19:0519:05, 23 May 2024 diff hist +1 m 2024 Calder Cup playoffs →Confrence Finals: the section heading was misspelled.
- 16:5816:58, 23 May 2024 diff hist +4 Bruce Springsteen discography Undid revision 1225308841 by 64.19.140.194 (talk)—serial vandal. Tag: Undo
- 16:5816:58, 23 May 2024 diff hist −126 Bruce Springsteen I should have checked the edit history. The IP editor made two vandalism edits. Reverting to last good version. Tag: Manual revert
- 16:5716:57, 23 May 2024 diff hist 0 Bruce Springsteen Undid revision 1225308076 by 64.19.140.194 (talk)—unsourced, apparent prank edit. You need a very strong and reliable source if you're going to make a claim like that one. Tags: Undo Reverted
22 May 2024
- 19:3319:33, 22 May 2024 diff hist +203 Talk:Utah NHL team →Team History: Reply. Tag: Reply
- 19:2819:28, 22 May 2024 diff hist +931 User talk:Joseph507357 →Do not delete other users' comments on article talk pages: new section. current Tag: New topic
- 19:2219:22, 22 May 2024 diff hist +467 Talk:Utah NHL team Undid revision 1225164736 by Joseph507357 (talk)—YOU do NOT delete someone else's comments from a talk page. Do that again and we'll have to involve administrators. Tag: Undo
- 11:4411:44, 22 May 2024 diff hist +187 Talk:Utah NHL team →Stop calling it an expansion team: added one thing to my last comment.
- 11:4111:41, 22 May 2024 diff hist +280 Talk:Utah NHL team →Stop calling it an expansion team: Reply. Tag: Reply
- 11:3911:39, 22 May 2024 diff hist +123 Talk:Utah NHL team →Team History: Reply. Tag: Reply
21 May 2024
- 19:2919:29, 21 May 2024 diff hist −1 2025 FIFA Club World Cup Undid revision 1225000838 by 2.24.35.188 (talk)—you need to read MOS:ENGVAR and MOS:RETAIN. Tag: Undo
- 13:5813:58, 21 May 2024 diff hist +23 m Catholic Bible →Differences from Catholic lectionaries: "currently"? When is "currently"? Lacks context. See MOS:CURRENTLY.
18 May 2024
- 21:2821:28, 18 May 2024 diff hist −3 m List of NHL players with 500 consecutive games played →500 consecutive games played: violation of MOS:DATECOMMA; cleaned up awkward/repetitious wording. current
- 01:1601:16, 18 May 2024 diff hist +266 Talk:Concorde →Add an Aircraft of comparable role, configuration, and era?: Reply to disagree. Tag: Reply
17 May 2024
- 14:5314:53, 17 May 2024 diff hist +3 m Original Six →End of era: Inconsistent and illogical to say "Finals" in some places and "Final" in others (unless a source using the latter were being quoted, which wasn't the case).
- 13:2713:27, 17 May 2024 diff hist +315 Talk:National Hockey League →Colors for the conference labels in the "Teams" table: Reply to oknazevad. Tag: Reply
- 12:0812:08, 17 May 2024 diff hist −124 National Football League →Clubs: Removed the colors from the table of teams because they appear to violate MOS:COLORCODING, which says (in part), "excessive background shading of table entries impedes readability and recognition of Wikilinks. Background color should be used only as a supplementary visual cue and should be subtle (consider using lighter, less-dominant pastel hues) rather than glaring." Nothing else in this article correlates to the red and blue colors, so I don't think even that is helpful here. Tag: Reverted
- 12:0412:04, 17 May 2024 diff hist +178 Talk:National Hockey League →Colors for the conference labels in the "Teams" table: Reply to say thanks for the link. Tag: Reply
- 00:5500:55, 17 May 2024 diff hist +1,006 Talk:National Hockey League →Colors for the conference labels in the "Teams" table: new section. Tag: New topic
16 May 2024
- 17:3517:35, 16 May 2024 diff hist +2 m Bruce Springsteen →2022–present: Only the Strong Survive, collaborations, and touring: punctuation error.
- 17:3517:35, 16 May 2024 diff hist +3 m Springsteen and E Street Band 2023 Tour →Road Diary: Bruce Springsteen and the E Street Band: fixed punctuation errors.
15 May 2024
- 02:0602:06, 15 May 2024 diff hist +695 Talk:National Football League →Change the term club back to team: Reply. I’m signing off for the night, so this is all I have to say for now. Tag: Reply
- 01:0201:02, 15 May 2024 diff hist +598 Talk:National Football League →Change the term club back to team: Reply to say I agree. Tag: Reply
- 00:5800:58, 15 May 2024 diff hist +9 National Football League Undid revision 1223896240 by Toa Nidhiki05 (talk)—this is essentially a WP:COMMONNAME issue. It doesn’t matter what the NFL uses. The term in American English is "teams." That’s near-universal, regardless of what technical term the league might use. Tags: Undo Reverted
- 00:1100:11, 15 May 2024 diff hist −202 National Football League →Clubs: The normal term is "teams," not the European soccer term "clubs." Also grammar fixes and removed colors in the table of teams. The colors aren’t needed and don’t add anything. Tag: Reverted
14 May 2024
- 22:5522:55, 14 May 2024 diff hist −200 Major League Soccer →Teams: This is not an article about the NBA. There’s no reason to use an NBA color template here. Plus the colors made it hard to read.
- 22:5322:53, 14 May 2024 diff hist −213 National Football League Undid revision 1223818022 by ZlatanSweden10 (talk)—NBA colors are irrelevant to an NFL article. Tags: Undo Reverted
- 22:5122:51, 14 May 2024 diff hist −199 National Hockey League →List of teams: I can see no reason why a template using an ***NBA*** color scheme is in any way appropriate for an NHL article. The colors made it too hard to read anyway.
12 May 2024
- 17:4817:48, 12 May 2024 diff hist +3 m Utah NHL team →Name: previous edit violated MOS:BADDATEFORMAT and punctuation rules. Tag: Reverted
10 May 2024
- 16:2816:28, 10 May 2024 diff hist −176 Speed limits in the United States Undid revision 1223187539 by 37.111.207.190 (talk)—removing spam. current Tag: Undo
- 13:0613:06, 10 May 2024 diff hist −1 Speed limits in the United States by jurisdiction Undid revision 1223168442 by 2600:100B:B1C4:866B:0:33:FD32:CB01 (talk)—removed nonsense. Tag: Undo
8 May 2024
- 15:5015:50, 8 May 2024 diff hist +1 m 2024 NCAA Division I men's lacrosse tournament →Bracket: There is no such school as "John Hopkins." It's "Johns Hopkins"—as every other reference in this article should have made clear.
7 May 2024
- 15:5415:54, 7 May 2024 diff hist −1 m Utah NHL team →Establishment of the team: removed stray space in the previous edit between period and reference.
- 11:3611:36, 7 May 2024 diff hist −1 2025 FIFA Club World Cup Undid revision 1222681464 by Leprazoori (talk)—your edit violates ENGVAR. Tag: Undo
6 May 2024
- 13:3413:34, 6 May 2024 diff hist 0 m Roman Catholic Archdiocese of Washington further capitalization corrections, as well as one spelling. current
- 13:3213:32, 6 May 2024 diff hist 0 m Roman Catholic Archdiocese of Washington →20th century: capitalization.
- 13:3113:31, 6 May 2024 diff hist −1 m Roman Catholic Archdiocese of Washington →17th century: capitalization.
- 12:2312:23, 6 May 2024 diff hist 0 m James Aloysius Hickey The word is "Mass," not "mass." current
- 12:2112:21, 6 May 2024 diff hist 0 m Cathedral of St. Matthew the Apostle (Washington, D.C.) →Historic events: as the rest of the article demonstrates, the word is "Mass," capitalized. current
3 May 2024
- 13:2213:22, 3 May 2024 diff hist −15 m User talk:209.195.250.178 →May 2024: removed redundancy in my previous edit. current
- 13:2113:21, 3 May 2024 diff hist +334 User talk:209.195.250.178 →May 2024: new section. Tag: New topic
- 13:2013:20, 3 May 2024 diff hist +3 1994 FIFA World Cup Undid revision 1222029900 by 209.195.250.178 (talk)—You got banned once already for pulling this stunt. Why are you trying again? Just stop, please. Tag: Undo
- 12:2812:28, 3 May 2024 diff hist +2 m National Hockey League →List of teams: an open compound takes an en dash, not a hyphen.
2 May 2024
- 20:5420:54, 2 May 2024 diff hist +2,566 Talk:Utah NHL team →"Utah NHL team" as singular v. plural: new section. Tag: New topic
1 May 2024
- 20:0320:03, 1 May 2024 diff hist +1 m List of outdoor ice hockey games Violation of MOS:DATECOMMA.
30 April 2024
- 16:5016:50, 30 April 2024 diff hist −32 Washington Capitals Undid revision 1221555217 by 166.198.252.3 (talk)—yet more of the same old vandalism. Tag: Undo
- 11:4411:44, 30 April 2024 diff hist +985 Talk:Francis Scott Key Bridge (Baltimore) →U.S. vs. American national anthem: Reply. Tag: Reply
- 00:5600:56, 30 April 2024 diff hist +4 Francis Scott Key Bridge (Baltimore) Undid revision 1221448736 by Trorov (talk)—You've been reverted, now you can take it to the talk page. And don’t give us orders on how to edit. Tag: Undo
- 00:5500:55, 30 April 2024 diff hist +11 m Talk:Francis Scott Key Bridge (Baltimore) →U.S. vs. American national anthem: darn autocorrect. Also linked username.
- 00:5400:54, 30 April 2024 diff hist +213 Talk:Francis Scott Key Bridge (Baltimore) →U.S. vs. American national anthem: comment. Tag: Reply
29 April 2024
- 15:5715:57, 29 April 2024 diff hist +4 Francis Scott Key Bridge (Baltimore) Undid revision 1221379088 by Trorov (talk)—"American" is the accepted demonym for things related to the United States, and in any event it is completely clear from the context what it means here. You cannot seriously claim with a straight face that anyone would be confused by that word's use here. Tag: Undo
- 15:5415:54, 29 April 2024 diff hist −5 Major League Soccer Undid revision 1221378764 by Kwaku Nyame (talk)—this edit contained a bunch of typos. I was going to try to go through fixing the errors while leaving the correct parts, but that proved unworkable. Tag: Undo
- 15:5215:52, 29 April 2024 diff hist +27 Alexander Ovechkin Undid revision 1221378465 by 192.251.197.188 (talk)—it was accurate the way it was. Jagr, for example, had over 800 goals if you add the playoff stats. Tag: Undo
- 12:1212:12, 29 April 2024 diff hist −1 m Nationals–Phillies rivalry "Loose" is not the correct word for when a team fails to win something.
26 April 2024
- 13:1513:15, 26 April 2024 diff hist +19 m National Hockey League →Teams: the sentence about the Coyotes suffered from singular/plural disagreement by using plural at the beginning and singular at the end. I tweaked the wording slightly to fix that and made one other minor wording change.
25 April 2024
- 15:1915:19, 25 April 2024 diff hist −3 m Washington Commanders →Unofficially retired: no need for passive voice.
- 11:3611:36, 25 April 2024 diff hist −104 Tommy Paul (tennis) Reverted a series of extremely vulgar edits by a serial vandal to the last valid version. Tag: Manual revert
24 April 2024
- 22:4522:45, 24 April 2024 diff hist +472 Talk:Springsteen and E Street Band 2023 Tour →Regarding List of Songs Performed: comment. Tag: Reply
- 20:1420:14, 24 April 2024 diff hist +2 m Atlantic Coast Conference →2010–present: An ampersand is not properly used as a substitute for the word "and" in regular running text.
- 15:2715:27, 24 April 2024 diff hist +739 User talk:98.101.234.186 →April 2024: Please stop. current
- 15:2215:22, 24 April 2024 diff hist +1 Madison Square Garden Undid revision 1220558767 by 98.101.234.186 (talk)—apparent serial vandal. Tag: Undo
23 April 2024
- 17:3217:32, 23 April 2024 diff hist +4 m National Hockey League Corrected punctuation errors (missing apostrophe in a possessive; violation of MOS:DATECOMMA when someone failed to include the comma after the year); fixed singular/plural disagreement ("Arizona Coyotes" is plural, so "its" is incorrect).
- 14:2614:26, 23 April 2024 diff hist +3 National Hockey League →Teams: previous edit contained two typos. I am not sure the previous editor's characterization of the Coyotes/Utah situation is entirely accurate from a legal standpoint, although from a practical layman's standpoint it surely is. I'll let someone else decide on that—I'm just cleaning up typos. (I'm not sure beginning a sentence with the word "This" is really a good idea, but every time I try to rephrase it I wind up with more of a mess, so I gave up.)
22 April 2024
- 19:3419:34, 22 April 2024 diff hist +643 Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Concerts →What level of setlist detail is appropriate for a tour article?: Reply. Tag: Reply
- 19:1519:15, 22 April 2024 diff hist −3,592 Springsteen and E Street Band 2023 Tour →Set list: two paragraphs deleted because they had turned into a long list of songs performed that was both unsourced and arguably unencylopedic. The two paragraphs seemed to violate WP:STICKTOTHESOURCE, WP:NOTCATALOG, WP:NOTNEWS (insofar as they represented a running list of songs performed on the tour), and WP:NOTDATABASE. In short, this material seems more suited for a fan site like Greasy Lake, or the late lamented Backstreets.com, that revels in minutia.
- 18:4318:43, 22 April 2024 diff hist +3 m Utah NHL team →Establishment of the team: missing preposition.
- 18:1518:15, 22 April 2024 diff hist +335 Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Concerts →What level of setlist detail is appropriate for a tour article?: Reply. Tag: Reply
- 16:5816:58, 22 April 2024 diff hist +1,534 Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Concerts →What level of setlist detail is appropriate for a tour article?: new section. Tag: New topic
- 12:2312:23, 22 April 2024 diff hist −14 National Hockey League →Teams: the sentence I reverted in my last edit was still somewhat ungrammatical, so I've taken a stab at rewriting it. Also deleted the word "current" in regard to the Coyotes franchise because it's superfluous—there is no "past" or "future" such franchise.
- 11:3911:39, 22 April 2024 diff hist +15 National Hockey League Undid revision 1220173804 by Bentheswimmer11 (talk)—Good-faith edit turned it into an incomplete sentence. Also no need for so many spaces after a period, but the sentence fragment was the main issue. Tag: Undo
20 April 2024
- 19:0419:04, 20 April 2024 diff hist −9 m Utah NHL team No need to link the Jazz in consecutive paragraphs. I debated removing redundant links in the "establishment" section but decided not to do so for the moment.
- 15:2515:25, 20 April 2024 diff hist +4 m Utah NHL team →Establishment of the team: "NBA" is a defined term from earlier in the article and thus ought to be abbreviated here. Tag: Reverted
- 13:3113:31, 20 April 2024 diff hist +10 m Hershey Bears →Retired numbers: someone incorrectly inserted a bunch of hyphens where dashes were needed.
- 13:3013:30, 20 April 2024 diff hist 0 m Hershey Bears →Retired numbers: the word is "defenseman" in an article about a US-based team.
- 13:2713:27, 20 April 2024 diff hist +2 m Hershey Bears Another improper hyphen.
- 13:2613:26, 20 April 2024 diff hist −2 m Hershey Bears Replaced erroneous hyphens with en dashes; reworded to avoid "currently," which is generally deprecated.
- 01:5201:52, 20 April 2024 diff hist −2 m Utah NHL team "Team" is singular and therefore takes "its."
19 April 2024
- 21:5421:54, 19 April 2024 diff hist +14 Utah NHL team Undid revision 1219797084 by 156.34.67.212 (talk)—If your edit is accurate, then prove it by citing a reliable source we all can review. Tag: Undo
- 19:5619:56, 19 April 2024 diff hist +19 Utah NHL team Undid revision 1219781784 by 2601:582:8400:A1C0:4598:C27A:CD0F:70C (talk)—The league treats it as an expansion team, even if in all practical respects it's a franchise move. Changing your IP address to make the same edit multiple times doesn't make you right. Tag: Undo
- 18:2518:25, 19 April 2024 diff hist 0 1987 Washington Redskins season →Personnel: moved Anthony Allen from the regular roster to the scab roster. As the text further down (and in his article) explains, he started on the scab roster and then was signed to the regular roster after the strike ended. I seem to recall he wore #89 as a scab, but I don't have a source to cite for that. current
- 13:1713:17, 19 April 2024 diff hist −4 m Utah NHL team Changed plural to singular in the final sentence of the first paragraph to agree with the usage in the first two sentences, both of which use singular. Obviously this will likely change in the future once there is a real name.
- 13:1513:15, 19 April 2024 diff hist −12 m Utah NHL team Removed two parenthetical "defined terms" (MLS and NFL) because neither one appears in the article a second time. There's not much point in "defining" an acronym that is not used a second time. (The "MLS" reference was also awkward in terms of positioning a possessive form.)
- 12:4212:42, 19 April 2024 diff hist 0 m National Hockey League →Teams: "respectfully" was the wrong word.
- 12:3012:30, 19 April 2024 diff hist −33 National Hockey League →List of teams: revised the footnote for the same reasons why, two edits back, I removed the asterisk from the table as to Utah. The Coyotes are not "now Utah NHL team" according to the league and the franchise(s).
- 12:2812:28, 19 April 2024 diff hist −4 m National Hockey League minor wording change. This also avoids the issue of comma usage.
- 12:2612:26, 19 April 2024 diff hist −1 National Hockey League →List of teams: removed the asterisk from the Utah team. While, as a practical matter, obviously it is a franchise relocation, the NHL and the team have chosen to treat it as an expansion for legal reasons. Using the asterisk here is thus potentially misleading and is also inconsistent with the Utah team's article, which (correctly) calls it an expansion team.
- 12:2512:25, 19 April 2024 diff hist +1,277 Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Ice Hockey →Potential Arizona Coyotes relocation: comment about potential inconsistency between articles.
- 02:1502:15, 19 April 2024 diff hist +19 Utah NHL team Undid revision 1219657610 by 2001:56B:9FF7:EB33:F824:B62F:988D:5AA2 (talk)—Nobody ever said there will be an expansion draft. But the NHL said it’s an expansion team. Their position controls, not your (or my) opinion. Stop vandalizing the article. Tag: Undo
- 00:2100:21, 19 April 2024 diff hist −52 m Utah NHL team →Owners: the article already defines the Jazz and the NBA further up.
- 00:2000:20, 19 April 2024 diff hist −32 m Utah NHL team →Establishment of the team: removed overlinking and unnecessary defined term; also word tweaks.
- 00:1700:17, 19 April 2024 diff hist +3 Utah NHL team →History of ice hockey in Salt Lake City: capitalization; multiple violations of MOS:GEOCOMMA.
18 April 2024
- 22:0522:05, 18 April 2024 diff hist −33 Arizona Coyotes Simplified the sentence about the arenas.
- 22:0322:03, 18 April 2024 diff hist +6 m Arizona Coyotes Hyphens are not used to separate date ranges.
- 21:0221:02, 18 April 2024 diff hist −2 Arizona Coyotes "Has" and "their" don't agree with each other. There's no ideal solution to this, but the subject/antecedent for both words is "franchise" (or, before my prior edit, "team"), which is a singular word. I therefore think the singular is grammatically correct here.
- 21:0121:01, 18 April 2024 diff hist +5 Arizona Coyotes Changed "team" to "franchise" in the first sentence. Perhaps pedantic, but with no coach, players, etc., it's not much of a "team."
- 20:5820:58, 18 April 2024 diff hist 0 National Hockey League →List of teams: alphabetizing where the Utah Youths appear in the table.
- 20:1920:19, 18 April 2024 diff hist −86 Arizona Coyotes Removed Utah from the infobox. As the article explains, the NHL is treating this like a Cleveland Browns/Baltimore Ravens situation.
- 20:1320:13, 18 April 2024 diff hist 0 m Arizona Coyotes →New ownership and the Arizona Coyotes (2013–2024): "warm up" is two words when used as a verb phrase.
- 20:1220:12, 18 April 2024 diff hist +2 m Arizona Coyotes another incorrect hyphen.
- 20:1220:12, 18 April 2024 diff hist +2 m Arizona Coyotes en dash, not hyphen, in date ranges.
- 20:0120:01, 18 April 2024 diff hist +6 m Arizona Coyotes Ugh, trying to avoid using a sentence to end a preposition with.
- 19:0319:03, 18 April 2024 diff hist −501 Subway Series →World Series matchups: The 2000 World Series does not belong in a table showing early and mid-1900s World Series when the Mets didn't even exist. The 2000 World Series is discussed further down the article. Tag: Reverted
- 17:4217:42, 18 April 2024 diff hist −29 National Hockey League Undid revision 1219589360 by Bryanth2o (talk)—violation of WP:CRYSTAL until it's actually confirmed by the league itself, not by the media citing anonymous "sources." Tag: Undo
- 15:4415:44, 18 April 2024 diff hist +2 m 2024–25 NHL season →Uniforms: singular/plural disagreement.
- 15:4315:43, 18 April 2024 diff hist 0 m 2024–25 NHL season obvious spelling mistake.
- 15:4215:42, 18 April 2024 diff hist +1 m 2024–25 NHL season violation of MOS:GEOCOMMA.
- 15:1215:12, 18 April 2024 diff hist +129 Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Ice Hockey →Potential Arizona Coyotes relocation: Reply. Tag: Reply
17 April 2024
- 17:5817:58, 17 April 2024 diff hist +1 m List of Washington Capitals seasons →Notes: violation of MOS:DATECOMMA.
16 April 2024
- 20:4020:40, 16 April 2024 diff hist −2 m 2026 FIFA World Cup "Ghana" is singular, so it takes the verb "was."
- 19:4019:40, 16 April 2024 diff hist +372 Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Ice Hockey →Potential Arizona Coyotes relocation: comment.
- 18:0618:06, 16 April 2024 diff hist +305 Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Ice Hockey →Potential Arizona Coyotes relocation: Reply. Tag: Reply
- 17:3417:34, 16 April 2024 diff hist +1 m Springsteen and E Street Band 2023 Tour →Set list: missing comma.
15 April 2024
- 15:4815:48, 15 April 2024 diff hist +1 m PGA Championship →Location: violation of MOS:GEOCOMMA.
12 April 2024
- 13:4313:43, 12 April 2024 diff hist −75 NHL Winter Classic →Throwback sweaters: No offense, but what possible reason is there to include the team names for 2025 when there is no information to include? The table up above tells the reader who will play, so this was just redundant. Tag: Manual revert
- 13:3013:30, 12 April 2024 diff hist +9 m University of Virginia MOS:ORDINAL. Also a spelling error ("37st"? Who could possibly think that's right?).
