User contributions for Dieter.Meinertzhagen
A user with 5,034 edits. Account created on 1 January 2021.
29 May 2024
- 00:4400:44, 29 May 2024 diff hist +50 Berlin: The Downfall 1945 →Reception: Convert "cite web" citation to "cite interview" because this source is an interview to suppress malformed citation error message. current
28 May 2024
- 23:1523:15, 28 May 2024 diff hist +1 USRC James Madison →Revenue cutter: Correct malformed citation. current
- 23:1023:10, 28 May 2024 diff hist +671 USRC James Madison →American aftermath: Expand on what happened to the captured crew of USRC James Madison.
- 22:4622:46, 28 May 2024 diff hist +225 USRC James Madison →Revenue cutter: Add quote to citation to clarify exactly why this source is being cited at this point.
- 22:3822:38, 28 May 2024 diff hist +382 USRC James Madison →Revenue cutter: Add archive-url of reference and place citation in Citation Style 1
- 22:0422:04, 28 May 2024 diff hist 0 USRC James Madison →Capture: Typo: ft Huskinson -> Huskisson
- 22:0222:02, 28 May 2024 diff hist +1 USRC James Madison →Capture: Correct malformed citation.
- 21:5821:58, 28 May 2024 diff hist +18 USRC James Madison Move account of capture of ''Madison'' into "Capture" section.
- 21:4221:42, 28 May 2024 diff hist +893 USRC James Madison →Revenue cutter: Expand on ship's last cruise in the Revenue Marine.
- 21:0021:00, 28 May 2024 diff hist −1 Training Institute Royal Brunei Armed Forces Undid revision 1225405261 by Naturallylove (talk) Remove wikilink from "forerunner" to Forerunner Saga because in the content of this article, "forerunner" refers to the predecessor of the Training Institute Royal Brunei Armed Forces and the wikilink refers to a trilogy of science fiction novels. current Tag: Undo
- 20:3620:36, 28 May 2024 diff hist +1 USRC James Madison →American aftermath: Typo: As noted throughout the article, USRC James Madison's captain was named Brooks not Brook.
- 20:3320:33, 28 May 2024 diff hist 0 USRC James Madison →Revenue cutter: Move wikilink for master to first occurrence of term.
- 20:1920:19, 28 May 2024 diff hist +29 USRC James Madison →Revenue cutter: Wikilink "HMS Barbadoes"
- 20:1320:13, 28 May 2024 diff hist +2 USRC James Madison →Revenue cutter: Remove unintended implication that the "Wade" was sailing from Nassau.
- 20:1020:10, 28 May 2024 diff hist +71 USRC James Madison →Revenue cutter: (1) Lower-case common noun "First mate" in middle of sentence. (2) Make sentence less telegraphic and easier to parse: ft "...the ''Wade'', Johnson, master, and another vessel, Pindar, master, from Nassau...." -> "...the ''Wade'', whose master was named Johnson, and also a second vessel from Nassau whose master was named Pindar..." (3) Wikilnk master. so non-nautical readers know it is synonymous with "ship's captain" in this case.
27 May 2024
- 17:4417:44, 27 May 2024 diff hist +8 Black slug Per the "Invasive species" section, the black slug is an invasive species in Alaska; modify lead paragraph accordingly. current
26 May 2024
- 21:5821:58, 26 May 2024 diff hist 0 m David Drake →Biography: Typo: "On 2019, he announced..." -> "In 2019, he announced..." current
- 20:5420:54, 26 May 2024 diff hist +1 m USCGC Roanoke Island (1) Typo: ft: "when it became [disable]"-> "when it became [disabled]" (2) ft "Sentinel-class" -> "Sentinel class" for consistency within article. current
- 18:1618:16, 26 May 2024 diff hist +67 USCGC Anacapa →Decommissioning: Add name of the successor cutter of "Anacapa" in Petersburg. current
- 18:0418:04, 26 May 2024 diff hist +18 USCGC Anacapa →Petersburg: (1) Change verb from present to past tense because "Anacapa" is decommissioned. (2) Add metric-unit length of "Ryou-Un Maru" to existing length in feet. Spell out rather than abbreviate "feet" for consistency with rest of article.
- 03:2903:29, 26 May 2024 diff hist +1 Stanisław Burhardt-Bukacki Add space between rank and name. current
- 03:2703:27, 26 May 2024 diff hist −1 m Stanisław Burhardt-Bukacki Remove spurious whitespace from year: ft "19 42" -> "1942"
- 03:2403:24, 26 May 2024 diff hist 0 Western betrayal →Beginning of World War II, 1939: MOS:JOBTITLE: the name of the military rank is capitalized when it appears in front of the person's name. I capitalized the rank "general" in the quotation because it appears to be a translation of a Polish-language source and I am assuming the lower-case "general" is a translation error by a Wikipedia editor unfamiliar with MOS:JOBTITLE. current
25 May 2024
- 20:4720:47, 25 May 2024 diff hist +2 SLNS Vijayabahu (P627) →Sri Lanka Navy: (1) MOS:DATEUNIFY: change date format to "Month day, year" like rest of article. (2) Clarify sentence by moving the most important object of the verb closest to the verb current
- 20:4220:42, 25 May 2024 diff hist +28 SLNS Vijayabahu (P627) →Sri Lanka Navy: WP:SHIPNAME: italicize ship name "Lu Peng Yuan Yu"
- 20:4020:40, 25 May 2024 diff hist +5 SLNS Vijayabahu (P627) →Sri Lanka Navy: Clarify sentence by separating out its different phrases from each other.
- 20:3420:34, 25 May 2024 diff hist −16 SLNS Vijayabahu (P627) →Sri Lanka Navy: (1) The proper noun "USCG Station Seattle" isn't preceded by an article. (2) Add "convert" template to format voyage distance with commas, per MOS:DIGITS. (3) The "long sea voyage" happened at the same time as "sailing to her new home", so we use a present participle ("covering") not a past participle ("had covered")..
- 20:0720:07, 25 May 2024 diff hist +24 SLNS Vijayabahu (P627) →Sri Lanka Navy: (1) "decommission" is a verb, but we need instead the corresponding noun "decommissioning" in this place in the sentence. (3) WP:SHIPNAME: italicize ship name "Sherman". (3) Need an infinitive verb after verb "was able": ft "...was able recover..." -> "...was able to recover..."
- 20:0020:00, 25 May 2024 diff hist −4 SLNS Vijayabahu (P627) →Sri Lanka Navy: (1) "she" doesn't take an article. (2) Correct comma splice: ft "...she was deployed to the location of the Lu Peng Yuan Yu sinking with a team of divers to attempt a rescue[, the] operation didn't detect survivors..." -> "...she was deployed to the location of the Lu Peng Yuan Yu sinking with a team of divers to attempt a rescue[. The] operation didn't detect survivors..."
- 19:5619:56, 25 May 2024 diff hist +1 SLNS Vijayabahu (P627) →Sri Lanka Navy: (1) Replace neuter pronouns with feminine pronouns to refer to "Vijayabahu" because the ship has been referred to as "she" throughout the article. (2) Correct preposition: ft "her new home [to] Sri Lanka" -> "her new home [in] Sri Lanka" (3) Correct comma splice: ft "...transiting the Pacific and Indian Oceans[,] the ship finally arrived in Colombo..." -> "...transiting the Pacific and Indian Oceans[. T]he ship finally arrived in Colombo]]..."
- 19:2719:27, 25 May 2024 diff hist +86 The Golden Gate (Seth novel) →Plot summary: John Brown does not know that the advertisement has been placed by Janet Hayakawa until she tells him. current
- 19:0719:07, 25 May 2024 diff hist +4 The Day of the Jackal (film) →Plot: Add missing word: ft '"Lundquist" is wanted for murder of Madame de Montpellier' -> '"Lundquist" is wanted for [the] murder of Madame de Montpellier' current
- 18:5918:59, 25 May 2024 diff hist −1 Mikoyan MiG-29 →Poland: (1) Title should precede, not follow, name: ft "Boris Pistorius German Defence Minister" -> "German Defence Minister Boris Pistorius" (2) For a single completed event in the past ("announced"), use simple past tense not imperfect (3) the approval preceded the announcement, so use past perfect ("had approved") current
- 03:4003:40, 25 May 2024 diff hist −5 Joe Chester Grammar: ft "His albums have been won acclaim" -> "His albums have won acclaim" current
- 01:5701:57, 25 May 2024 diff hist −1 USCGC Anacapa →Decommissioning: Typo: ft: Anancapa -> Anacapa
24 May 2024
- 07:4907:49, 24 May 2024 diff hist +4 Joe Chester →LUCIA: MOS:MAJORWORK: italicize novel name "Ulysses"
- 07:4607:46, 24 May 2024 diff hist +8 Joe Chester →Jupiter's Wife: MOS:WEBITALICS: italicize names of internet magazines "Benzine Magazine" and "Magic Revue Pop Moderne"
- 07:4207:42, 24 May 2024 diff hist 0 Joe Chester →Jupiter's Wife: Un-capitalize common noun "Rock and Roll"
- 07:2407:24, 24 May 2024 diff hist +8 Joe Chester →A Murder Of Crows: MOS:MAJORWORK: italicize television series "Other Voices" and radio program "Pet Sounds"
- 07:1407:14, 24 May 2024 diff hist +4 Joe Chester →Ten Speed Racer: MOS:MAJORWORK: italicize radio show name "Pet Sounds"
- 07:1207:12, 24 May 2024 diff hist +3 Joe Chester →Ten Speed Racer: There was only one EP: "Girls & Magazines"
- 06:1806:18, 24 May 2024 diff hist +10 Joe Chester →Jupiter's Wife: (1) Irish Mirror -> Irish Daily Mirror for consistency with rest of article.(2) MOS:MAJORWORK: Italicize newspaper name "Irish Daily Mirror"
- 06:1506:15, 24 May 2024 diff hist −19 Joe Chester Move wikilink for "Irish Daily Mirror" to first occurrence of name.
- 06:0906:09, 24 May 2024 diff hist +4 Joe Chester MOS:MAJORWORK: italicize newspaper name "Irish Daily Mirror" (not, I think, "The Irish Daily Mirror")
- 05:3705:37, 24 May 2024 diff hist +23 Joe Chester →The Easter Vigil: MOS:MAJORWORK: italicize newspaper name "Irish Daily Mirror"
- 05:3305:33, 24 May 2024 diff hist +4 Joe Chester →She Darks Me: MOS:MAJORWORK: italicize newspaper name "The Irish Times".
- 05:2605:26, 24 May 2024 diff hist +4 Joe Chester →LUCIA: MOS:MAJORWORK: italicize newspaper name "Irish Times".
- 05:2405:24, 24 May 2024 diff hist +20 Joe Chester →LUCIA: MOS:MAJORWORK: italicize newspaper names.
- 05:1805:18, 24 May 2024 diff hist +1 Joe Chester →Jupiter's Wife: MOS:POSS: form the singular possessive by adding " 's "
- 05:1605:16, 24 May 2024 diff hist +1 Joe Chester →1990 - 2000: MOS:POSS: form the singular possessive by adding " 's ".
- 05:1405:14, 24 May 2024 diff hist +11 Joe Chester (1) Make clear that "James" is not the last name of some unidentified person but rather James Joyce: ft "James' daughter" -> "James Joyce's daughter" (2) MOS:MAJORWORK: italicize novel name "Ulysses"
- 05:0505:05, 24 May 2024 diff hist −1 Joe Chester →1990 - 2000: My mistake: "The Sound of Bells" is not an album but a name that Chester recorded under. Un-italicize it.
- 04:5904:59, 24 May 2024 diff hist +4 Joe Chester →Ten Speed Racer: MOS:MAJORWORK: italicize album name "10SR"
- 04:5804:58, 24 May 2024 diff hist +2 Joe Chester →1990 - 2000: ft "Tenspeedracer" -> "Ten Speed Racer" for consistency with rest of article.
- 04:5104:51, 24 May 2024 diff hist −6 Joe Chester →LUCIA: MOS:BOLD: there is no need to boldface Joseph Chester's name.
- 04:5004:50, 24 May 2024 diff hist −16 Joe Chester →LUCIA: MOS:PEACOCK: ft "a very special show" -> "a solo performance".
- 04:4004:40, 24 May 2024 diff hist +1 Joe Chester Manual undo of "Revision as of 16:22, 6 March 2024" by editor Naturallylove: we need an adjective here ("celebrated") to describe the noun "scene". We can't use a verb ("celebrate") in the adjective's place.
- 04:3104:31, 24 May 2024 diff hist +4 Joe Chester →LUCIA: MOS:MAJORWORK: italicize album name "Carolan/Cage".
- 04:2904:29, 24 May 2024 diff hist +4 Joe Chester →The Waterboys: MOS:MAJORWORK: italicize newspaper name "The Daily Telegraph".
- 04:2704:27, 24 May 2024 diff hist −2 Joe Chester →The Easter Vigil: (1) MOS:BOLD: there is no need to boldface the broadcaster name "RTE" (2) MOS:MAJORWORK: italicize newspaper name "The Sunday Business Post"
- 04:2304:23, 24 May 2024 diff hist +2 Joe Chester →The Easter Vigil: MOS:MAJORWORK: italicize newspaper names "Blackpool Sentinel" and "Irish Daily Sun"
- 04:1704:17, 24 May 2024 diff hist −2 Joe Chester →Jupiter's Wife: MOS:MAJORWORK: italicize film name "Under The Ragged Thorn".
- 04:1404:14, 24 May 2024 diff hist +2 Joe Chester →The Waterboys: MOS:MAJORWORK: italicize name of performance "An Appointment With Mr. Yeats"
- 04:0704:07, 24 May 2024 diff hist +4 Joe Chester →1990 - 2000: MOS:MAJORWORK: italicize album name "Creation".
- 04:0304:03, 24 May 2024 diff hist 0 m Joe Chester →LUCIA: lower-case first letter of common noun "Vinyl"
- 04:0204:02, 24 May 2024 diff hist +5 Joe Chester →LUCIA: MOS:MAJORWORK: italicize album name "Fragments of Lucia"
- 04:0104:01, 24 May 2024 diff hist +8 Joe Chester →A Murder Of Crows: MOS:MAJORWORK: italicize names of albums.
- 03:5803:58, 24 May 2024 diff hist −44 Joe Chester MOS:MINORWORK: quote names of songs and other short musical compositions.
- 03:3803:38, 24 May 2024 diff hist +102 Joe Chester MOS:MAJORWORK: italicize names of albums and the named composition LUCIA.
- 03:0703:07, 24 May 2024 diff hist −3 Joe Chester Undid revision 1211815857 by Naturallylove (talk) Because the verb "recorded" has a direct object in this sentence, we need to use active voice rather than passive voice ("was recorded") in this sentence. If we used passive voice, we would need to follow the verb "recorded" with a noun describing who did the recording. Tag: Undo
- 03:0003:00, 24 May 2024 diff hist +27 USCGC Anacapa Add decommissioned status to infobox. Standardize date format throughout article to "month day, year"
- 02:3102:31, 24 May 2024 diff hist −4 Okechukwu Amah Undid revision 1197952896 by Naturallylove (talk) Remove wikilink to Okechukwu disambiguation page because it does not add any useful information to this article about Okechukwu Amah. current Tag: Undo
- 01:5301:53, 24 May 2024 diff hist 0 Training Institute Royal Brunei Armed Forces Move wikilink for Royal Brunei Armed Forces to first non-bold mention of term.
- 00:1400:14, 24 May 2024 diff hist +91 USCGC Anacapa →Decommissioning: Say why "Anacapa" earned her awards.
23 May 2024
- 23:1423:14, 23 May 2024 diff hist +37 USCGC Anacapa →Petersburg: Clarify the relationship between the "Anacapa" and the grounding of the ''Frank H. Brown''. Change some present-tense verbs to past tense because "Anacapa" is decommissioned now.
- 22:5822:58, 23 May 2024 diff hist +2,950 USCGC Anacapa Add information about two-year period homeported in Port Angeles. (2) Add information about decommissioning.
- 20:4220:42, 23 May 2024 diff hist +328 Marine Protector-class patrol boat →Boats in class: Correct homeport of USCGC Pike current
- 20:2720:27, 23 May 2024 diff hist +492 Island-class patrol boat →Dispositions: Add decommissioning information for USCGC Anacapa
- 19:4919:49, 23 May 2024 diff hist +20 USCGC Kukui (WLB-203) →History: WP:SHIPNAME: italicize ship names "Kukui" and "Sheng Yi Tsai No. 166". current
- 18:1118:11, 23 May 2024 diff hist −243 Coast Guard District 13 →District 13 Units: Remove USCGC Cuttyhunk because she was decommissioned on 2022-5-5 current
- 18:0518:05, 23 May 2024 diff hist +383 Island-class patrol boat →Dispositions: Add reference for USCGC Cuttyhunk decommissioning
- 16:3416:34, 23 May 2024 diff hist −19 Merchant navy Undid revision 1225292594 by 2409:40F0:2018:BAE9:DD7:8324:BCDB:6FF9 (talk) This information needs to be part of a complete sentence to be usable by readers. current Tag: Undo
- 07:0507:05, 23 May 2024 diff hist +5 Battle of Leyte Gulf →Admiral Kurita withdraws: MOS:NUM09: spell out small numbers, particularly one which starts a sentence. current
- 07:0207:02, 23 May 2024 diff hist +3 Battle of Leyte Gulf →Battle: MOS:NUM09: spell out small number beginning sentence.
- 06:5706:57, 23 May 2024 diff hist +8 m Battle of Leyte Gulf →First kamikaze attacks of the Pacific War: MOS:NUM09: Spell out small numbers, particularly one which begins a sentence.
22 May 2024
- 08:2408:24, 22 May 2024 diff hist −4 Training Institute Royal Brunei Armed Forces Undid revision 1224638573 by Naturallylove (talk) Remove wikilink to incarnation article, which is about gods becoming embodied in flesh. Incarnation as used in this article is about the starting point of the evolution of the Training Institute Royal Brunei Armed Forces Tag: Undo
- 08:1908:19, 22 May 2024 diff hist −23 Haplogroup E-M2 Undid revision 1224417037 by Naturallylove (talk) Remove wikilink from "southern Turkey" to Southern Turkestan because Southern Turkestan is not in Turkey but rather Afghanistan. Tag: Undo
- 08:1308:13, 22 May 2024 diff hist −10 Sitka Public Library →External links: Update external link to library website. current
- 08:1108:11, 22 May 2024 diff hist −4 Ursula K. Le Guin →Later writings: Remove wikilink (The Unreal and the Real) which links to this same page.
- 06:5506:55, 22 May 2024 diff hist 0 Corruption Perceptions Index Undid revision 1225073384 by 2409:40E4:3B:158F:8000:0:0:0 (talk) The table in this section only covers the years 2020 to 2023. current Tag: Undo
- 06:4206:42, 22 May 2024 diff hist −37 Corruption in Turkmenistan Update cited source from 2021 version of Corruption Perceptions Index to 2023 version
- 06:2206:22, 22 May 2024 diff hist +948 Corruption in Bangladesh →Causes of corruption: Change citation to incorporate new URL of source. Expand citation. Change data presented to be consistent with the source; in particular, a document created in 2015 cannot be used to present 2023 data.
- 05:2505:25, 22 May 2024 diff hist +1 m Naoufal Fassih →Feud: Add apostrophe to plural possessive. ft: "the assailants car" -> "the assailants' car" current
- 05:1305:13, 22 May 2024 diff hist +18 Corruption in Uzbekistan Add context to 2015 information by moving it from present to past tense and by dating it to 2015 current
- 05:0905:09, 22 May 2024 diff hist +947 Corruption in Uzbekistan According to Transparency International, despite the seriousness of Uzbekistan's corruption, the situation is improving.
- 04:5404:54, 22 May 2024 diff hist +14 Corruption in Uzbekistan Correct title of article in citation.
- 04:5104:51, 22 May 2024 diff hist −167 Corruption in Uzbekistan Undid revision 1224611372 by Edward Jocob Philip Smith (talk) (1) 31 is not the *rank* assigned by Transparency International to Uzbekistan, it is the *score*. They are different things. (2) The word "widepread" is not in my dictionary. Tag: Undo
- 04:1604:16, 22 May 2024 diff hist −42 Yahya Khan Undid revision 1223919267 by Mehediabedin (talk) Yahya was never a head of state of Bangladesh. He was at one time the head of state of Pakistan. Tag: Undo
21 May 2024
- 23:1623:16, 21 May 2024 diff hist −42 Muhammad Ayub Khan Undid revision 1223919238 by Mehediabedin (talk) Ayub was not a Bangladeshi head of state. He had already retired when Bangladesh became independent. Tag: Undo
12 May 2024
- 22:1922:19, 12 May 2024 diff hist −1 Corruption in Thailand Remove stray period from middle of sentence. current
- 16:1816:18, 12 May 2024 diff hist −21 Muhammad Ayub Khan →British India: Remove wikilink from suspended without pay because the leave of absence article does not help understand what happened to Ayub. He did not take a leave of absence; rather, he was removed from command of the regiment and given other, lesser duties, and also punished by having his pay withheld.
- 00:2200:22, 12 May 2024 diff hist +11 Operation Market Time (1) Make sentemce easier to parse by setting off parenthetical phrase with commas. (2) Saying that the ships "include" 5-inch naval guns is saying that each gun is one of the ships. current
11 May 2024
- 23:5423:54, 11 May 2024 diff hist +17 USCGC Spencer (WPG-36) →Post-war career: (1) Lower-case first letter of adjective in the middle of a sentence. (2) Clarify that "Spencer's" mission was not to keep *all* troops and supplies out of South Vietnam, only *enemy* ones.
- 17:5217:52, 11 May 2024 diff hist +10 1st Fallschirm-Panzer Division Hermann Göring →Art treasures of Monte Cassino: Clarify ambiguity; it was not the Castel Sant'Angelo that was attacked but rather Monte Cassino. Also, Castel Sant'Angelo is a building, not a geographical feature, so things are stored *in* it not *on* it. current
- 17:1817:18, 11 May 2024 diff hist +2 Valerie Davidson →Career: MOS:AMP: the title of the position as reported in reliable sources, e.g. https://www.anthc.org/news/valerie-nurraraaluk-davidson-named-anthc-president/, does not include the ampersand. current
- 07:1907:19, 11 May 2024 diff hist +1 Valerie Davidson →Career: Typo: Consrtium -> Consortium
- 07:1407:14, 11 May 2024 diff hist −40 Valerie Davidson →Career: Condense and clarify.
- 04:3004:30, 11 May 2024 diff hist +36 Valerie Davidson Change date format from various other formats to "Month dd, yyyy", which seems to be the most common format in the article. Correct date errors in two of my citations en route.
- 04:1104:11, 11 May 2024 diff hist +19 Valerie Davidson →Career: Clarify an ambiguity.
- 04:1004:10, 11 May 2024 diff hist +42 Valerie Davidson Try to make Davidson's recent professional history more readable by reducing the number of acronyms.
- 03:5403:54, 11 May 2024 diff hist +1,487 Valerie Davidson Update ANTHC president/CEO position history. Move the details of her ANTHC history from the lead paragraph to the "Career" section.
9 May 2024
- 06:5806:58, 9 May 2024 diff hist +4 Daniel Harvey Hill →Personal life: Wikilink Rufus Clay Barringer. current
- 03:5403:54, 9 May 2024 diff hist +45 Polar Security Cutter program →Project timeline: Break up long and complex sentence into two sentences. Add wikilink to Government Accountability Office. Emphasize that the PSC design was based on a hypothetical design rather than an actual ship. current
- 03:4703:47, 9 May 2024 diff hist +1,132 Polar Security Cutter program →Project timeline: Additional information about the status of the PSC design from testimony to the Subcommittee on Transportation and Maritime Security.
- 03:0203:02, 9 May 2024 diff hist −10 Polar Security Cutter program →Project timeline: The cited source has been modified to show that the testimony is no longer upcoming but was presented on 7 May 2024. Change the article accordingly.
7 May 2024
- 19:0019:00, 7 May 2024 diff hist 0 Neo-Aristotelianism (literature) MOS:CITEPUNCT: move period from after to before adjacent citation. current
- 17:1417:14, 7 May 2024 diff hist −14 Corruption in Pakistan Undid revision 1222733950 by 103.123.113.57 (talk) MOS:SIC: When we quote Jinnah, we must quote him accurately. We must not put our own words in Jinnah's mouth. current Tag: Undo
5 May 2024
- 18:4718:47, 5 May 2024 diff hist +281 USCGC Confidence →History: Add paragraph about Mission Effectiveness Project in 2007. current
- 18:3318:33, 5 May 2024 diff hist +15 USCGC Confidence →History: MOS:NUM09: spell out small numbers.
- 18:3118:31, 5 May 2024 diff hist −1 USCGC Confidence →History: Change present tense verbs to past tense to reflect the departure of Confidence from active duty.
- 18:2218:22, 5 May 2024 diff hist +716 USCGC Confidence →History: Add move of ship from "active duty" to "in commission, special status". Remove 2006 prediction that Confidence would remain in service until 2016-2021 because in 2024 that prediction has been overtaken by events.
- 17:3217:32, 5 May 2024 diff hist −8 Kolchak Coup Correct my error: Kolchak's title was "Minister of Military and Naval Affairs" not "Minister of Military Affairs and Naval Affairs"
- 17:3017:30, 5 May 2024 diff hist −27 Kolchak Coup (1) The Minister of Military and Naval Affairs was not two people, but only one: Alexander Kolchak. (2) Remove wikilink from "Minister of Military" to "Ministry of defence" because they are not the same thing; also, wikilinking only the "Minister of Military" part of the title "Minister of Military and Naval Affairs" has given at least one editor the mistaken impression that "Minister of Military and Naval Affairs" describes not one person but two.
- 04:2104:21, 5 May 2024 diff hist +44 Madame Claude Undid revision 1222277524 by Alirezabmousavi (talk) Undo unexplained removal of cited material. Note that although the source does not identify which of the two Shahs of Iran was her client, Reza Shah died in 1944, prior to the establishment of Claude's organization, so the Shah in question must be his son Mohammad Reza. current Tag: Undo
- 04:0204:02, 5 May 2024 diff hist +4 Corruption in Iran →Corruption among the royal family and court: Add missing word: ft "there were rumours that Princess Ashraf, Shah's twin sister was arrested.." -> "there were rumours that Princess Ashraf, [the] Shah's twin sister was arrested..." current
- 03:5003:50, 5 May 2024 diff hist +726 Corruption in Iran Undid revision 1222277719 by Alirezabmousavi (talk) Revert unexplained removal of cited material. Improve citation.
4 May 2024
- 04:1704:17, 4 May 2024 diff hist +4 Sewickley, Pennsylvania →In popular culture: MOS:MAJORWORK: italicize movie name "Houseguest". current
2 May 2024
- 02:3602:36, 2 May 2024 diff hist 0 Corruption in Ukraine Undid revision 1221794761 by 2600:100C:B23E:D3EB:D00F:F8FF:FE25:19AE (talk) According to the reference (https://www.transparency.org/en/cpi/2023/index/ukr), Ukraine's 2023 Corruption Perceptions Index score was 36 not 66. Tag: Undo
1 May 2024
- 06:4206:42, 1 May 2024 diff hist +9 Louis de Maud'huy →Biography: More usual formulation: ft "Legion of Honour Grand Cross, he died in Paris on 16 July 1921."-> "A Grand Cross of the Legion of Honour, he died in Paris on 16 July 1921." current
- 06:1106:11, 1 May 2024 diff hist +9 Louis de Maud'huy →Biography: Change to more usual form: ft "Legion of Honour commander" -> "a Commander of the Legion of Honour"
- 06:0306:03, 1 May 2024 diff hist +134 Louis de Maud'huy →Biography: Completely change meaning of sentence to match cited source.
- 05:4805:48, 1 May 2024 diff hist +18 Louis de Maud'huy Rewrite sentence for clarity: ft "Louis de Maud'huy became an infantry officer graduating from Saint-Cyr, General Staff Course graduated, chasseur à pied until becoming colonel ..." -> "Louis de Maud'huy graduated from Saint-Cyr and later the General Staff Course. He served as an infantry officer of chasseurs à pied until becoming a colonel..."
- 05:3505:35, 1 May 2024 diff hist +18 Louis de Maud'huy (1) Upper-case proper noun "35th infantry regiment" to "35th Infantry Regiment". (2) Lower-case common noun "Brigadier general" to "brigadier general" (3) MOS:JOBTITLE: A "Division Officer" is apparently the title of a officer commanding a division, hence capitalized, but "infantry" seems to be an adjectival noun that is not part of the title, hence lower-case: ft "Infantry Division Officer" -> "infantry Division Officer"
- 05:1705:17, 1 May 2024 diff hist +11 Louis de Maud'huy (1) MOS:JOBTITLE: lower-case common noun "General" (2) Add missing word: ft "his mother Thérèse Joséphine Olry" -> "his mother [was] Thérèse Joséphine Olry" (3) Add missing word: ft '"Lorrain from Moselle", he was haunted by the idea...' -> '[A] "Lorrain from Moselle", he was haunted by the idea...' (3) Change "was to "had been" because the haunting was not something that began and ended; it began and then went on for an indeterminate period: ft "he [was] haunted" -> "he [had been] haunted"
- 01:3801:38, 1 May 2024 diff hist +156 USCGC Alert (WMEC-630) Add HAER record to External Links section. current
- 01:1901:19, 1 May 2024 diff hist +160 USCGC Steadfast →External links: Add HAEC record to external links. current
- 01:0501:05, 1 May 2024 diff hist +167 USCGC Diligence →External links: Add external link to HAER record. current
30 April 2024
- 20:3620:36, 30 April 2024 diff hist −4 Louis de Maud'huy →Biography: de Maud'huy's remains aren't commemorated in the Invalides, rather his actions in life are commemorated. His remains are just stored there.
- 05:4505:45, 30 April 2024 diff hist +4 January 6 United States Capitol attack →Law enforcement and National Guard preparations: Add missing word: ft "At that point the individual left room, and stopped participating in the conference."-> "At that point the individual left [the] room, and stopped participating in the conference."
29 April 2024
- 05:1105:11, 29 April 2024 diff hist +223 USCGC Mackinaw (WAGB-83) →External links: Add template for Historic American Engineering Record at Library of Congress. current
28 April 2024
- 23:0423:04, 28 April 2024 diff hist +11 Marguerite Audoux →Biography: Wikilink Halles
27 April 2024
- 20:3320:33, 27 April 2024 diff hist −51 Corruption in Morocco (1) "This is wrong" needs to be clarified -- what exactly is signified by "This"? (2) Please, clarify "Corruption is very high in morocco" in the context of the Corruption Perceptions Index surrounding the sentence. Morocco's score of only 38 (out of 100) signals high corruption, but not very high -- the worst score is only 11. Also, the worldwide average score of 43 indicates that Morocco's high corruption is only a little worse than average in the world. current Tag: Undo
- 20:0820:08, 27 April 2024 diff hist −18 Kolchak Coup Remove wikilink incorrectly linking "supreme power" (of the non-fictional All-Russian Council of Ministers) to the fictional Marvel comic book series about the Squadron Supreme.
26 April 2024
- 04:1604:16, 26 April 2024 diff hist +110 Island-class patrol boat →Dispositions: Cite reference for USCGC Maui, Monomoy and Wrangell decommissionings. Collapse separate citations for Aquidneck and Adak decommissionings into one named-reference citation.
- 03:5803:58, 26 April 2024 diff hist +347 Island-class patrol boat →Dispositions: Cite reference for decommissioning of USCGC Adak.
- 03:5403:54, 26 April 2024 diff hist +347 Island-class patrol boat →Dispositions: Cite reference for decommissioning of USCGC Aquidneck.
- 03:4103:41, 26 April 2024 diff hist −62 USCGC Monomoy (WPB-1326) Remove infobox "Ship note" that Monomoy is currently forward-deployed to Manama, Bahrain; she is decommissioned. current
25 April 2024
- 17:1317:13, 25 April 2024 diff hist +3 Yahya Khan "succeeded the presidency" would mean that the office of the presidency came to an end and was replaced by Yahya. What actually happened is that Yahya became president, replacing Ayub.
- 17:0517:05, 25 April 2024 diff hist −1 Yahya Khan →Presidency (1969–1971): Emphasize that, per the source, the uprising spread to East Pakistan from West Pakistan: ft "A sustained anti-regime mass movement began in the fall of 1968 in West Pakistan. The uprising spread [in] East Pakistan and gathered strength." -> "A sustained anti-regime mass movement began in the fall of 1968 in West Pakistan. The uprising spread [to] East Pakistan and gathered strength."
- 16:3616:36, 25 April 2024 diff hist −4 Yahya Khan Using the passive voice here opens the unanswered question of *who* advanced Yahya. Better to use active voice; regardless of how he advanced, he did advance.
- 04:5904:59, 25 April 2024 diff hist +5 Windward Passage →Geology: WP:SHIPNAME: italicize ship name. Remove punctuation from ship prefix. current
- 04:5604:56, 25 April 2024 diff hist +1 USCGC Resolute →History: Typo: "Windard Passage" -> "Windward Passage" current
- 03:2003:20, 25 April 2024 diff hist 0 Corruption Perceptions Index →2020–2023: Canada's score in the 2021 Corruption Perceptions Index was 74 not 75. Ref: https://www.transparency.org/en/cpi/2021/index/can
24 April 2024
- 04:0904:09, 24 April 2024 diff hist 0 USCGC Reliance (WMEC-615) Clarify that this ship is the first of the 210' Medium Endurance Cutter class overall, not just the first of that class to be named "Reliance". current
23 April 2024
- 20:5820:58, 23 April 2024 diff hist +13 Corruption in Venezuela Emphasize that Venezuela's 2023 Corruptions Perceptions Index score is the lowest in its region.
- 20:5520:55, 23 April 2024 diff hist −43 Corruption in Venezuela (1) MOS:LAYOUT:: Move "Notes" section from before to after "See also" section. (2) Update Corruption Perceptions Index score and rank from 2022 to 2023 values.
- 20:3620:36, 23 April 2024 diff hist −61 Corruption in Uruguay Update Corruption Perceptions Index score and rank from 2022 to 2023 values. current
- 20:2720:27, 23 April 2024 diff hist −30 Corruption in Peru (1) MOS:LAYOUT: move "Notes" section from before to after "See also" section. (2) Update Corruption Perceptions Index score and rank from 2022 to 2023. current
- 20:1320:13, 23 April 2024 diff hist 0 m Corruption in Paraguay MOS:LAYOUT: Move "Notes" section from before to after "See also" section. current
- 20:0620:06, 23 April 2024 diff hist −30 Corruption in Paraguay →Present situation: Update Corruption Perceptions Index score and rank from 2022 to 2023 values.
22 April 2024
- 14:3214:32, 22 April 2024 diff hist 0 Corruption in Ecuador (1) MOS:LAYOUT: move "Notes" section from before to after "See also" section. (2) Typo: data from Corruption Perceptions Index is 2023 not 2022. current
- 14:3014:30, 22 April 2024 diff hist 0 Corruption in Colombia MOS:LAYOUT: move "Notes" section from before to after "See also" section. current
- 14:2714:27, 22 April 2024 diff hist −30 Corruption in Ecuador →Indicators: Update Corruption Perceptions Index score and rank from 2022 to 2023 values.
- 14:1614:16, 22 April 2024 diff hist −30 Corruption in Colombia Update Corruption Perceptions Index score and rank from 2022 to 2023 values.
- 05:5405:54, 22 April 2024 diff hist −34 Corruption in Chile (1) Update Corruption Perceptions Index score and rank from 2022 to 2023 values. (2) MOS:LAYOUT: move "Notes" section from before "See also" section to after. current
- 05:4105:41, 22 April 2024 diff hist −1 Corruption in Brazil Change "refn" style note to "efn" style note so that the list of countries to which Brazil is being compared displays properly. current
- 05:3805:38, 22 April 2024 diff hist −26 Corruption in Brazil →Measurement: Provise better reference for regional Corruption Perceptions Index scores.
- 05:3005:30, 22 April 2024 diff hist −30 Corruption in Bolivia →Indicators, perceptions, and attitudes: Update Corruption Perceptions Index score and rank from 2022 to 2023 values. current
- 05:2505:25, 22 April 2024 diff hist 0 Corruption in Argentina →Extent: Correct typo: Corruption Perceptions Index information presented here is now 2023, not 2022, information. current
- 05:2205:22, 22 April 2024 diff hist 0 m Corruption in Argentina MOS:LAYOUT: Move "Notes" section from before to after "See also" section.
- 05:1905:19, 22 April 2024 diff hist −75 Corruption in Argentina →Extent: Update Corruption Perceptions Index score and rank from 2022 to 2023.
21 April 2024
- 20:4820:48, 21 April 2024 diff hist +249 Corruption in Nicaragua Provide better source for regional scores. Correct typos. Provide better source for claim in first sentence. current
- 19:4319:43, 21 April 2024 diff hist −29 Corruption in Haiti Update Corruption Perceptions Index score and rank from 2022 to 2023 values. current
- 19:3419:34, 21 April 2024 diff hist +282 Corruption in El Salvador →Corruption Perceptions Index: Add 2023 Corruption Perceptions Index rank and score to table. current
- 19:2619:26, 21 April 2024 diff hist −98 Corruption in Cuba Update Corruption Perceptions Index score and rank from 2022 to 2023 values.
- 19:2019:20, 21 April 2024 diff hist −29 Corruption in Costa Rica →Background: Update Corruption Perceptions Index rank and score from 2022 to 2023. current
20 April 2024
- 23:5123:51, 20 April 2024 diff hist −94 Corruption in Mexico Updated Corruption Perceptions Index score and rank from 2022 to 2023 values. current
- 19:3319:33, 20 April 2024 diff hist −89 Corruption in Canada (1) Update Corruption Perceptions Index score and rank from 2022 to 2023. (2) MOS:SECTIONORDER: Move "Notes" after "See also".
- 18:5418:54, 20 April 2024 diff hist −9 Corruption in North Macedonia Update Corruption Perceptions Index score and rank from 2022 to 2023 values.
- 16:0316:03, 20 April 2024 diff hist −4 The Ministry of Ungentlemanly Warfare →Plot: "Scuttling" a ship is done by people on board the ship, not by people outside the ship, e.g. by U-boats with torpedoes and gunfire: ft "aid ships constantly scuttled by German U-Boats" -> "aid ships constantly sunk by German U-Boats"
- 05:4605:46, 20 April 2024 diff hist +48 Corruption in Luxembourg Update Corruption Perceptions Index score and rank from 2022 to 2023 values. current
- 05:2905:29, 20 April 2024 diff hist +34 Corruption in Lithuania Add "Notes" section so that list of countries to which Lithania is being compared displays properly. current
- 05:2705:27, 20 April 2024 diff hist +906 Corruption in Lithuania →International rankings: Update Corruption Perceptions Index score and rank from 2022 to 2023. Add some regional context so that score and rank are more understandable.
- 03:5603:56, 20 April 2024 diff hist −5 Blackburn Skua →Operational history: MOS:DATEUNIFY: make date consistent with other dates in section: ft "On 26 and 27th of April..." -> "On 26 and 27 April..." current
19 April 2024
- 16:2216:22, 19 April 2024 diff hist +19 Nigerian Civil War →South East Freedom Fight: Add "citation needed" tag to unreferenced section.
- 16:1916:19, 19 April 2024 diff hist 0 Corruption in Latvia Correct error in URL current
- 05:4705:47, 19 April 2024 diff hist −16 Corruption in Latvia Update Corruption Perceptions Index score and rank from 2022 to 2023.
- 05:4005:40, 19 April 2024 diff hist +788 Corruption in Kosovo Updated Corruption Perceptions Index score and rank from 2022 to 2023. Added some regional context so that rank and score are more understandable. Added "Notes"section so that list of regional countries to which Kosovo is compared displays correctly.
18 April 2024
- 04:1004:10, 18 April 2024 diff hist +34 Corruption in Italy Add "Notes" section so that list of countries to which Italy is being compare displays properly.
- 04:0804:08, 18 April 2024 diff hist +918 Corruption in Italy →Perceptions: Update Corruption Perceptions Index score and rank from 2022 to 2023 values. Add regional context so that score and rank are more understandable.
- 03:5703:57, 18 April 2024 diff hist 0 Corruption in the Republic of Ireland →Miler Magrath: "Catholic" in this context is a proper noun, hence capitalized.
- 03:5603:56, 18 April 2024 diff hist +919 Corruption in the Republic of Ireland Update Corruption Perceptions Index rank and score from 2022 to 2023. Add some regional context so that rank and score are more understandable. Add "Notes" section so that list of regional countries to which Ireland is being compared displays properly.
17 April 2024
- 01:5501:55, 17 April 2024 diff hist +2 m SS City of Glasgow →Disappearance: Add missing word: ft "the hull of large iron vessel"-> "the hull of [a] large iron vessel" current
- 00:3700:37, 17 April 2024 diff hist +2,136 Corruption in Bahrain Add references and remove "Unreferenced section" template from "Statistical evaluations" section. Group all of the Corruption Perceptions Index data together in the "Statistical evaluations" section. current
- 00:1700:17, 17 April 2024 diff hist +33 Corruption in Brunei Add "Notes"section so that regional countries to which Brunei is being compared displays correctly.
- 00:1600:16, 17 April 2024 diff hist +1,383 Corruption in Brunei →Overview: Add context to 2020 Corruption Perceptions Index score and rank.
16 April 2024
- 23:3723:37, 16 April 2024 diff hist +899 Corruption in Iceland Update Corruption Perceptions Index score and rank from 2022 to 2023 values. Add some regional context so that score and rank are more understandable.
- 23:2423:24, 16 April 2024 diff hist +1,190 Crime in Hungary →Corruption: Update Corruption Perceptions Index score and rank from 2022 to 2023. Add some regional context to make score and rank more understandable.
- 20:2220:22, 16 April 2024 diff hist −237 Nigerian Civil War →South East Freedom Fight: (1) This citation is of the front page of a commercial site which sells academic papers which the buyer can present as their own work. The citation is inadequate because it does not specify which of the many, many products for sale on the site supports the new paragraph in the article. (2) This citiation is unacceptable because it is of a self-published source.
- 19:2919:29, 16 April 2024 diff hist +14 University of Alaska Fairbanks Distinguish the UAF campus on top of Troth Yeddha'/College Hill from the Interior Alaska Campus headquarters at the bottom of the hill and the Community and Technical College downtown.
- 19:2319:23, 16 April 2024 diff hist +37 University of Alaska Fairbanks Undid revision 1219194242 by DrewtheShrew (talk) The urban Fairbanks Troth Yeddha' campus ("the Fairbanks campus") is different from the rural Fairbanks-based Interior Alaska Campus and the urban Community & Technical College in Fairbanks; see https://www.uaf.edu/uaf/about/campuses/index.php Tag: Undo
15 April 2024
- 11:2211:22, 15 April 2024 diff hist −3 Corruption in Moldova (1) Update Corruption Perceptions Index score and rank from 2022 to 2023 values. (2) MOS:ORDER: move "Notes" section after "See also" section. current
- 11:1411:14, 15 April 2024 diff hist 0 m Corruption in Montenegro MOS:LAYOUT: move "Notes" section after "See also" section. current
- 11:1011:10, 15 April 2024 diff hist −7 Corruption in Montenegro →Government: Update Corruption Perceptions Index rank and score from 2022 to 2023 values.
- 10:2210:22, 15 April 2024 diff hist −2 Ramon A. Alcaraz →Conflict with Marcos: Macapagal did not attempt to "diffuse" (spread) these accusations but rather attempted to "defuse" them (render them harmless).
14 April 2024
- 22:0622:06, 14 April 2024 diff hist +34 Corruption in Greece Add "Notes" section so that list of regional countries to which Greece is being compared displays properly. current
- 22:0522:05, 14 April 2024 diff hist +860 Corruption in Greece →Extent of Greek tax evasion and corruption: Update Corruption Perceptions Index score and rank from 2022 to 2023. Add some regional context so that the score and rank are more understandable.
- 21:4821:48, 14 April 2024 diff hist +939 Corruption in Germany Update Corruption Perceptions Index rank and score from 2022 to 2023. Add some regional context so that the meaning of the rank and score is more clear.
- 19:3719:37, 14 April 2024 diff hist +8 m USCGC Mohawk (WMEC-913) →Service history: (1) WP:SHIPNAME: italicize ship name "Mohawk". (2) MOS:NUM09: spell out number 3 current
- 19:2219:22, 14 April 2024 diff hist +1 USCGC Escanaba (WMEC-907) →Service: MOS:EUPHEMISM: ft "A boarding party from ''Escanaba'' was [engaged] by the crew of a suspected drug smuggling go-fast boat"-> "A boarding party from ''Escanaba'' was [fired upon] by the crew of a suspected drug smuggling go-fast boat" current
- 17:2517:25, 14 April 2024 diff hist 0 m Artful Dodger →Television: Lower-case common noun "Transportation" in middle of sentence
- 17:0617:06, 14 April 2024 diff hist +195 Corruption in Denmark Fix citation errors. current
- 05:5405:54, 14 April 2024 diff hist −6 Jean Accart Provide better English translation of "Chasseurs du Ciel" current
- 03:4503:45, 14 April 2024 diff hist +948 Corruption in France Update Corruption Perceptions Index score and rank from 2022 to 2023 values. Add regional context so that score and rank are more understandable. Add "Notes" section so that list of regional countries to which France is being compared displays correctly. current
- 03:3203:32, 14 April 2024 diff hist +3,192 Corruption in Finland Update Corruption Perceptions Index rank and score from 2022 to 2023. Provide some chronological and regional context so that the score and rank are more understandable. Add "Notes" section so that the list of countries to which Finland is being compared displays correctly.
- 02:4202:42, 14 April 2024 diff hist +21 Corruption in Denmark Move Corruption Perceptions Index information to its own paragraph. Clarify how there can be more than one first-ranked country.
- 02:3402:34, 14 April 2024 diff hist +3,179 Corruption in Denmark Update Corruption Perceptions Index rank and score from 2022 to 2023. Add some regional and chronological context to help make significance of rank and score clearer. Add " Notes" section so that list of regional countries to which Denmark is being compared displays properly.
- 01:5401:54, 14 April 2024 diff hist +979 Corruption in the Czech Republic Update Corruption Perceptions Index score and rank for 2022 to 2023 values. Add some regional context so that the meaning of the score and rank is more clear. Add "Notes" section so that list of regional countries to which the Czech Republic is being compared displays correctly.
- 01:2401:24, 14 April 2024 diff hist −8 9 (Plassey) Battery Royal Artillery →History: The fort was not provided protection, rather it provided protection itself: "The fort [had the provided] protection from the French" -> "The fort [provided] protection from the French" current
- 01:1901:19, 14 April 2024 diff hist −2 9 (Plassey) Battery Royal Artillery I don't think "role" is a verb: ft "re-roling and changing names many times" -> "changing its role and name many times"
- 01:1601:16, 14 April 2024 diff hist 0 m 9 (Plassey) Battery Royal Artillery Possessive singular form of "battery" is "battery's" not "batteries"
13 April 2024
- 20:0420:04, 13 April 2024 diff hist +65 USCGC Dependable Move citation from lead paragraph to corresponding spot in article body.
- 16:4416:44, 13 April 2024 diff hist +13 Kolchak Coup Identify which person in the picture is Kolchak.
- 04:5204:52, 13 April 2024 diff hist +9 USCGC Dependable →Construction: Remove implication that the 3-inch gun was the ship's only armament.
- 04:5004:50, 13 April 2024 diff hist −3 m USCGC Dependable Rearrange sentences in more logical order.
12 April 2024
- 15:1715:17, 12 April 2024 diff hist +30 Kolchak Coup →Events of November 18: Replace very general wikilink (Revolutionaries) with more specific one (Socialist Revolutionaries) to explain the expression "Socialist Revolutionaries" used in the article.
- 14:5814:58, 12 April 2024 diff hist −11 Kolchak Coup Undid revision 1218409053 by Naturallylove (talk) The reverted wikilink is to the unfold disambiguation page, which deals with many diverse topics, none of which seem relevant to the meaning of "unfolded" as used here. Tag: Undo